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One of the most dangerous hurdles for a writer is the Bias of Knowledge—knowing your character is "good" in your head, while they accidentally read as "sociopathic" on the page. This intensive focuses on bridging that gap using the 3x3 Moral Alignment framework.
Whether you're writing a Lawful Good hero or a Chaotic Evil villain, this individualized feedback ensures your character’s morality, intentions, and actions are working in harmony to keep your readers hooked.
I will provide a deep-dive review of your exercise (up to 2,500 words), including:
In-line Feedback: Real-time reactions to your character's choices, dialogue, and moral "hinge" moments to see if their alignment is landing.
Audio Feedback: A high-level analysis where I discuss your character’s "vibe" and provide clear steps to ensure your readers relate to them exactly how you intended.
To ensure I can provide the most helpful feedback, please prepare a brief Moral Alignment Audit to include with your submission:
Intended Alignment: Where do you think this character sits on the 3x3 grid?
The Goal: What do you want the reader to feel about this character's morality? (e.g., "I want them to be a lovable rogue," or "I want them to be a terrifying but logical antagonist.")
Submission Standards:
File Format: Microsoft Word (.doc/.docx), Google Doc link (with "Editor" access), or PDF.
Page Limit: Maximum of 10 pages total.
Formatting: Double-spaced, 12pt font, with 1-inch margins.
File Name: Please use the format: YourName_AlignmentAssignment.
Note: I will email you within 24 hours of your purchase to provide a secure link for your submission. I aim to return your marked-up manuscript and audio feedback within 5 business days.
One of the most dangerous hurdles for a writer is the Bias of Knowledge—knowing your character is "good" in your head, while they accidentally read as "sociopathic" on the page. This intensive focuses on bridging that gap using the 3x3 Moral Alignment framework.
Whether you're writing a Lawful Good hero or a Chaotic Evil villain, this individualized feedback ensures your character’s morality, intentions, and actions are working in harmony to keep your readers hooked.
I will provide a deep-dive review of your exercise (up to 2,500 words), including:
In-line Feedback: Real-time reactions to your character's choices, dialogue, and moral "hinge" moments to see if their alignment is landing.
Audio Feedback: A high-level analysis where I discuss your character’s "vibe" and provide clear steps to ensure your readers relate to them exactly how you intended.
To ensure I can provide the most helpful feedback, please prepare a brief Moral Alignment Audit to include with your submission:
Intended Alignment: Where do you think this character sits on the 3x3 grid?
The Goal: What do you want the reader to feel about this character's morality? (e.g., "I want them to be a lovable rogue," or "I want them to be a terrifying but logical antagonist.")
Submission Standards:
File Format: Microsoft Word (.doc/.docx), Google Doc link (with "Editor" access), or PDF.
Page Limit: Maximum of 10 pages total.
Formatting: Double-spaced, 12pt font, with 1-inch margins.
File Name: Please use the format: YourName_AlignmentAssignment.
Note: I will email you within 24 hours of your purchase to provide a secure link for your submission. I aim to return your marked-up manuscript and audio feedback within 5 business days.