Stop filling out character surveys and start writing. This intensive focuses on the most vital element of story craft: The Round vs. Flat Character.
Many writers struggle to make their protagonists feel "human." This individualized feedback gives you the tools to build characters with internal depth and distinct voices.
Professional Critique: I will provide a deep-dive review of your 10 pages, including:
In-line Feedback: Real-time reactions to your characters' voices, mannerisms, and presence.
Audio feedback: A high-level analysis of your character's potential and clear steps for refinement.
Transform your characters from cardboard cutouts into living, breathing figures.
How to Submit Your Work
To ensure I can provide the most helpful feedback, please format your document using the following standards:
File Format: Microsoft Word (.doc/.docx), Google Doc link (with "Editor" access), or PDF.
Page Limit: Maximum of 10 pages total.
Formatting: Double-spaced, 12pt font, with 1-inch margins.
File Name: Please use the format: YourName_CharacterAssignment.
Note: If submitting a Google Doc, please ensure your sharing settings allow me to leave "Comments" and "Suggestions."
I will email you after your purchase so you can submit your work.
I try to return feedback as soon as possible, aiming for 5 business days max.
Stop fighting your natural creative rhythm. Discover your narrative blueprint.
The Writer’s Compass is a bespoke, human-written archetypal audit designed to name your unique creative patterns and the story themes you are narratively "coded" to explore. This 15-20 page report translates the data of your natal chart into a clear, actionable strategy for your writing life.
What’s Inside:
Your Creative Identity Audit: An analysis of the specific placements (including Mercury, Venus, Mars, and the Asteroids) that shape your voice, imagination, and story structure.
The "Library of Your Imagination": Identify the recurring motifs and archetypal struggles you are naturally drawn to write, so you can stop wasting time on ideas that lack "soul."
Process Alignment: Get the language to understand your natural creative seasons—whether you’re a "madcap" drafter or a seasonal writer—so you can ditch the guilt of traditional advice.
Targeted Next Steps: Coaching suggestions customized to your current project to help you move from stuck to sure.
Perfect for: Writers seeking clarity on their inherent patterns, authors starting a new project, or anyone who feels like traditional writing advice doesn't quite fit.
Delivery: You will receive your bespoke PDF report via email within 5–7 business days.
Take your clarity to the next level with a 1:1 intensive.
This offering includes the above, plus a 60-minute live alignment session via Zoom. We will dive deep into your report together to bridge the gap between your archetypal data and your specific manuscript-in-progress.
Best for: Writers who want to live-test their ideas and get immediate coaching feedback on their "True North" strategy.