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Stop filling out character surveys and start writing. This intensive focuses on the most vital element of story craft: The Round vs. Flat Character.
Many writers struggle to make their protagonists feel "human." This individualized feedback gives you the tools to build characters with internal depth and distinct voices.
Professional Critique: I will provide a deep-dive review of your 10 pages, including:
In-line Feedback: Real-time reactions to your characters' voices, mannerisms, and presence.
Audio feedback: A high-level analysis of your character's potential and clear steps for refinement.
Transform your characters from cardboard cutouts into living, breathing figures.
How to Submit Your Work
To ensure I can provide the most helpful feedback, please format your document using the following standards:
File Format: Microsoft Word (.doc/.docx), Google Doc link (with "Editor" access), or PDF.
Page Limit: Maximum of 10 pages total.
Formatting: Double-spaced, 12pt font, with 1-inch margins.
File Name: Please use the format: YourName_CharacterAssignment.
Note: If submitting a Google Doc, please ensure your sharing settings allow me to leave "Comments" and "Suggestions."
I will email you after your purchase so you can submit your work.
I try to return feedback as soon as possible, aiming for 5 business days max.
Stop filling out character surveys and start writing. This intensive focuses on the most vital element of story craft: The Round vs. Flat Character.
Many writers struggle to make their protagonists feel "human." This individualized feedback gives you the tools to build characters with internal depth and distinct voices.
Professional Critique: I will provide a deep-dive review of your 10 pages, including:
In-line Feedback: Real-time reactions to your characters' voices, mannerisms, and presence.
Audio feedback: A high-level analysis of your character's potential and clear steps for refinement.
Transform your characters from cardboard cutouts into living, breathing figures.
How to Submit Your Work
To ensure I can provide the most helpful feedback, please format your document using the following standards:
File Format: Microsoft Word (.doc/.docx), Google Doc link (with "Editor" access), or PDF.
Page Limit: Maximum of 10 pages total.
Formatting: Double-spaced, 12pt font, with 1-inch margins.
File Name: Please use the format: YourName_CharacterAssignment.
Note: If submitting a Google Doc, please ensure your sharing settings allow me to leave "Comments" and "Suggestions."
I will email you after your purchase so you can submit your work.
I try to return feedback as soon as possible, aiming for 5 business days max.